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19 May 2010 @ 11:31 am
[Fandom] Scars updated and OMG I'm dead  
I feel so dead. I stayed up while 2am finishing that Scars chapter last night >< It's not as high quality as I would have liked, but I guess the first half of the chapter could support the somewhat less well-written second half. Luckily the next chapter is an interlude that allows me some breathing room to charge my angst batteries.

Formspring questions are exceedingly RANDOM guys. SERIOUSLY ILU <3

I have no idea who Anonymouse is BTW, but I'm getting suspicious and think they must be on my Flist.

I got all excited about this fic: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5964682/1/Domination and then got a few sentences in and a part of me died a little to read this:

Was he the top candidate in the Pre-Solider Recruitment Program? Without a doubt. He had been a standout even at the opening orientation. The boy had come to the event dressed in a pure white leather coat and white leather pants with a silk white shirt. His boot was made out of white snake skin and a huge pale sword that had far too many parts sat on his back.

It's a shame. Until the pre-ocupation with Cloud's random outfit change, it was a pretty decent premise. Now I can't get it out of my head that they used such blatently bad writing techniques to show Cloud is meant to be different in this fic. It might still be worth a read but that sentence really turned me off.

Ugh. Does anyone want to do my Ancient Sumerian revision for me? No? ><
thisissaisai: buttsecksrsasai on May 19th, 2010 03:08 pm (UTC)
Don't you know, everything has to do with what your character's wearing! That's why every story must involve a detailed description of exactly what color your pants are, the placement of those holes, and whether or not they're boxers of briefs. You just don't understand the specifics of writing good characters! Their clothes need to tell me something about--

Fuck it. I can't even try to be serious. It's a cop-out for bad writers.

Kategrownupneko on May 19th, 2010 04:21 pm (UTC)

And I really wanted to see Sephiroth getting dominated by Cloud in a really sick and twisted way. All I got was a school boy idea of BDSM and a description of Cloud's white mage costume.
thisissaisairsasai on May 19th, 2010 04:42 pm (UTC)
That's an insult to all white mages in the history of white mages.

You may have more luck checking the kink meme. I'm sure there's some there.
Kategrownupneko on May 19th, 2010 08:19 pm (UTC)
When in doubt, check the kink meme XD